LOVED ONE

by marilyn   May 3, 2007


If you had a loved one who passed away wouldn't you have one last thing to say if u had the chance to go would you go or would you stay if u were the one who died you think it would be the same or would you be just a strange name if the one person you loved was in pain would you find anyone to blame did u realized you loved them when they died or where you really by their side do you remember all the times they lied or where you reminiscing they're death and counting all the tears you've cried so remember the people you love and love the people you have

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  • 17 years ago

    by chind

    Nice poem
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