It's a type of gender.

by Teria   May 3, 2007


It really is a
Type of gender I
Specifically dislike.

Among many reasons...

Trust is the foremost.
You wouldn't understand the
People that I hate..
Excuses, excuses. that's all they make.

Of course nothing can help.. I've
Failed each time.

Given the chance to change them..
Education doesn't work.
Nor,
Does the responsibility of an
Eternity of love.
Ruling that it's selfishness keeping them away.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Short, I wish it was a bit longer, but overall this was a good poem. I felt the flow lacked a little within this poem, I felt it was not one of your better writes, but you Vocab was good.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by The Pessimistic Peabody

    4/5 good poem, i do wish it stuck to some kind of poetry scheme but that is just me. Nice and unusual but very interesting. I love the way thoughts get formed into words by good writers for you surely are one.

  • 17 years ago

    by XxMoonLightxX

    Great job!...loved it...keep writng your really really good...

    i love your flow of writing it really fits ur style
    great job
    5/5
    ~Shannon~

  • 17 years ago

    by Nikki

    Good job!! =)))

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelsea

    I really like this poem. The way it is written just seems...
    I dunno. Pretty. I like the way you didn't stick to any sort of stanza scheme, it gives it a bit of flavour. Good job :]

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