Sad but good. I liked how you incorperated the title into the poem. 5/5

This is sad but its rly rly good keep it up
~melissa~

I love the poem, it expresses true feelings and dreams of an innocent girl hurt by mistakes and the ever numbing wake of reality

5/5 ( i would give you a 1000/5 but i it wont let me :P)

Wow you showed so much emotion in this poem, i love it! i love reading your poetry, it keeps me wanting more, which is important for me :) keep it up xoxo 5/5

Nicley written

This is so sad and beautiful. great writing!
~Claire

This is so... real!!! original, and very true. keep writing!!!

That is beautiful. so simple, but filled with so much emotion! great job...those simple poems are sometimes the best poems! anyways good job!