by Teria
Wow. I have no idea why I was shocked at the end, Lol. My mouth dropped. :/ What a horrible way to die,eh. |
Very nice!! real emotion. nice job. keep writing |
Aww...well I love the way you talked about acidic rain. That's just a really cool topic, now that I think of it. What really bummed me was that you killed the character. Now it's your poem, and like everyone else said, it's perfect. However, I would have liked it if the guy didn't die...I mean even though he died figuratively speaking >.< hehe...I'm just tired of people dieing in poems. Besides my state of mind right now, wow nice job! I liked the poem and the usage of words. |
by isabel
A sad way to die... a beautifully written poem and an amazing choice of words, though... |
Be glad that at least they see you as a friend... to the one I feel for, I am who used to be a friend... that turned into a flirt that couldn't stop waving at him... |
by Colorful
I liked ure poem but the ending was sad. But using expessive words made me inspired by ure work. Hehe. WEll keep up the great work and please do write often. I would like to read more of ure poems. |
by Madelaine
Thats a really good poem! |
by Jackie
I love the poem, sad ending, well written |
by Iris
This poem is sad, but i like it. the words just kinda flowed like water, y'know? keep up the good work!! |
I really love dis poem |
by Jenni Marie
"Thunder rolls through the blackening skies |