by Teria May 3, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
I'd lie. |
This was an excelent poem..i lovedit...sucxh a good flow..nice use of words and rhythem...very good rhyming! |
by Kelsea
Hm. I don't like this one as much, though it is good. The flow seems a bit rocky, so it is a little hard to read. |
by Gem
"Yet, there's angels and demons running our lives? |
by Kurt
This was a brilliant write as well. The flow was simple and allowed the reader to experience the words of the text rather than read them. I liked the ending of the poem also. It was an interesting ending with a unique twist. |