This was a brilliant write as well. The flow was simple and allowed the reader to experience the words of the text rather than read them. I liked the ending of the poem also. It was an interesting ending with a unique twist.

"Yet, there's angels and demons running our lives?
Millions of stars filling up the sky?
There's things we can't see, emotions we can't feel..
So, what makes you think that ghosts aren't real?"

That stanza really got to me, i loved how it ended on the rhetorical question yet after reading that stanza, the reader seriously ponders it.
There are so many unexlained things in our world. How can we say what's real or not
Excellent dark piece!
5/5
*Gem*

Hm. I don't like this one as much, though it is good. The flow seems a bit rocky, so it is a little hard to read.

This was an excelent poem..i lovedit...sucxh a good flow..nice use of words and rhythem...very good rhyming!

This is one of my favs

Great job
5/5
~Shannon~