by Marcus May 3, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
I am violent, a force of nature, |
I wouldn't say this poem 'reeks of vanity' as you put it, I view it as being full of power. There are some fantastic images here and it is very well written. |
by Jen
Hey i liked this marcus, you used some great words to create a good image =] |
by Soft Parade
Excelent, alot of feeling came through the poem when i read it. |
by Gem
Well done sweetie for making the top page =) |
by Espoirfailed
Really well worded, and such good imagery created, i really enjoyed it. it did not seem vein, it seemed meaning full and thought provoking. i got the impression it started as random thoughts and then, as if going through a sieve, became more refrained and focused. i loved the ambiguity of supernova. |