Comments : Sweet dreams and bullet holes...

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Wow that was truly amazing. i loved it, and I am almost speechless. The flow was flawless and its well penned, but the excellent, descrptive word choice really made this poem one of the best I have ever read. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Death 'IS' as bad as it seems mate.
    my favorite part was,
    "I flirted with the romantic evil
    And found my Valentine of sorrow"
    This was an amazing poem love, 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kristi White

    "Where the rain is only water
    And the fear is washed away"

    no, those are genius lines.
    Very crafy.
    I'd give it a 9.9 if it went that high but you'll have to settle for yet another 5 from me ^-^