Wow that was truly amazing. i loved it, and I am almost speechless. The flow was flawless and its well penned, but the excellent, descrptive word choice really made this poem one of the best I have ever read. 5/5

Death 'IS' as bad as it seems mate.
my favorite part was,
"I flirted with the romantic evil
And found my Valentine of sorrow"
This was an amazing poem love, 5/5.

"Where the rain is only water
And the fear is washed away"

no, those are genius lines.
Very crafy.
I'd give it a 9.9 if it went that high but you'll have to settle for yet another 5 from me ^-^