Revitalising (Haiku Collection)

by Gem   May 3, 2007


Loud thunder crashes
In furious baritones
Booming like a drum

Fork lighting flashes
Burning a path to the ground
Lighting up the sky

Rain drops join as one
Creating sheets of water
Soaking everything

The storm rages on
Powerful force of nature
Cleansing our tired earth

*Gem*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Autumn

    Maybe its because of my english, but I was tought to say ev-ery-thing. Three syllables.

  • 17 years ago

    by Infected with His Deadly Love

    I love Haiku's.
    And yours is just beautiful.

    'The storm rages on
    Powerful force of nature
    Cleansing our tired earth'

    Loved it 5/5

    [Sarah]

  • 17 years ago

    by Autumn

    "Cleansing our tired earth"

    "Soaking everything"

    They both have 6 syllables. But I guess how its how you say it. Normally, though, to shorten the a syllable you could put an apostraphy. Ex. Because, 'cause.

  • 17 years ago

    by The Sky is Falling

    Very nice. Penned well. 5/5 I loved it
    Check mine out please

  • 17 years ago

    by I will love you Forever and not a day less

    I really love this poem..........great work and can you check out some of my poems and tell me what you think.thankz....and 5/5......

    GREAT POEM!!!!!!!!!!!

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