One Minute Left

by I Seem to be the Heartless   May 3, 2007


Half an hour left
Until the end of the world
And here I stand
All alone.
Down below me
There's nothing but darkness.
Nothing but emptiness.
Nothing.

Fifteen minutes to go
And still nothing has changed.
There are no screams.
No sounds.
Just silence.

One minute left
And I am struggling to breathe,
Struggling to balance,
Starting to fall.
Still there is no sound
As I tumble
Into the dark abyss below.

Ten seconds -
No time to say 'goodbye'.
No time to say I'm sorry.
No time...

Five, four
Three, two
One
A final crimson tear
Traces its way down my cheek
As my world comes to
A dismal end.

03May2007
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  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Again real good job you put strucute and imagination into your work which i feel makes it work :D

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sourav

    It's different and good. Like the poem. Keep writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kayd

    Love the use of dismal at the end. I love this style, it's something I usualy use. Excellent work!