Tragically Disturbed

by GothicRockerGirl   May 3, 2007


Everyone wants to be liked!
Even kids who have their hair spiked.
Just because they look different then you,
Doesn't mean that they aren't people too.

Treat people as you would like to be treated,
And there wont be a chance for you to be defeated.
Succeed in school,
Instead of being another fool.

Jocks, Preps, misfits, Goths.
Hippies, stoners, nerds, sloth's.
Just names. Just labels.
Just another one of the night time fables.

They are all people, they all have feelings and pain.
Sometimes to a point where their tears come down like rain.
Make fun of them just to make yourself feel better.
Until someone finally writes a suicide letter.

You say you are not to blame.
Just because you have more fame.
But little did you know,
You're part of the reason they decided to finish this show.

Gone forever, no more lies.
Now the family just sits and cries.
All because their kids couldn't take it anymore.
They chose to just hit the floor,
Because they were tragically disturbed.

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  • 16 years ago

    by she

    The name caught my eye
    the meaning was powerful,
    you did great
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by HollywoodSmile

    Everyone should read this poem, there are so few who undersey htand how much power they have over who lives and who dies, or how easily the human mind can be..."tradgically disturbed". -musiclives23

  • 17 years ago

    by KAP DAR

    Everyone wants to be liked!
    Even kids who have their hair spiked.
    Just because they look different then you,
    Doesn't mean that they aren't people too.

    Treat people as you would like to be treated,
    And there wont be a chance for you to be defeated......SO TRUE VERY GOOD POEM! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by The Sky is Falling

    This poem is too true. I loved it. Written very well. 5/5 Nice job

  • 17 years ago

    by Destiny

    Wonderful.. You have an excellant point!! ^_^ 5/5