Oh my freakin' gosh! This is a REALLY REALLY REALLY good poem. I almost cried...I wanted to cry! I definately can relate to this. This is how I felt about my ex but, he didn't care. I truly tried to make it work and he put forth no effort. I was in love with him but, a heart can only take so much! Again, REALLY GOOD!
~Kayla~
AboveTheCrowd

I love this poem!
I think that you shouldn't give up. She will eventually see. I went throught the same sort of thing. I was best friends with this guy Johnny and he was so inlove with me and for a year i wouldn't date him because we were good friends and i didn't think i could be with him. I was scared to be with him because i had just ended a abusive relationship. But December 10th 2005 we i desided to give it a go and now we're married and just had our first child on April 5th, 2007. So don't give up. :)
Good Job on the poem!
xoxoxo