Comments : I can't keep holding on

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    I can relate to this one. good job, and I am sorry if you really wen though this. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Marina

    This is just... wow... so very well expressed... very good job 5/5 such a powerful poem, i love hte flow.. but this poem is more than just flow.. its the feeling of th actual events..
    -Marina.