Stop Me

by Cuddles   May 3, 2007


Stop me before I go too far.
Catch me before I hit the ground.
Hold me closely to your chest,
our mingled breathing the only sound.

Stop me before I take one more step.
Take my hand and hold on tight.
If I try to pull away don't let go.
Hold onto me throughout the night.

Fold me into your loving arms.
Tell me everything will be okay.
Stop me before I reach the edge.
Love me enough to make me stay.

(c) Mary Barren

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  • 17 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    Hey, awesome poem. great job

    your servant:
    david

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I love your concluding line! That was a beautiful ending to a beautiful poem. It had nice flow and rhyme!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by Hebe

    A beautiful poem.
    There's a nice flow in it.
    Very well written.

  • 17 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Ah, *tear*...
    wow, this was a great poem love.
    it was very into depth as well as intriguing.
    i wouldn't change a thing :)
    5/5 love.

  • 17 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    :O I don't even know what to say. I'm literally speechless.... Gaw. I don't think there is another poem that I could possibly relate to more than I can with this! I missed your poems so much, I'm definitely going to have to catch up on all of them! Keep up the amazing writing!

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