Comments : Stop Me

  • 17 years ago

    by J Z

    It's a very nice and good poem ...i really liked it

  • 17 years ago

    by carissalynn

    Ohhh!! EEE> i want that

  • 17 years ago

    by Sourav

    It's a commendable piece of eriting. IT deserves more than it got so far. Very very well written. Keep writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sourav

    It's a commendable piece of writing. IT deserves more than it got so far. Very very well written. Keep writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    :O I don't even know what to say. I'm literally speechless.... Gaw. I don't think there is another poem that I could possibly relate to more than I can with this! I missed your poems so much, I'm definitely going to have to catch up on all of them! Keep up the amazing writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Ah, *tear*...
    wow, this was a great poem love.
    it was very into depth as well as intriguing.
    i wouldn't change a thing :)
    5/5 love.

  • 17 years ago

    by Hebe

    A beautiful poem.
    There's a nice flow in it.
    Very well written.

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I love your concluding line! That was a beautiful ending to a beautiful poem. It had nice flow and rhyme!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    Hey, awesome poem. great job

    your servant:
    david