Oh my gosh, this is so amazing. I could never write anything this good!

Thank you Katie, I'm very happy you liked my first post, it's very encouraging. I wrote this some time ago yet it's still one of my favourites; don't give up, I couldn't write anything as dramatic either when I'm in a good mood heh I use poetry as a mean to heal myself, the metaphors then come pretty much on their own and its easy - I guess it's a constructive way of throwing a tantrum (...did I just lose my neo-fans with this post?)

Its such a very inspiring work.. it was sad and very impressive poet! the way u used ur words are totally written so well. great job!