This is good! I like it you really like free-verse style ehehehe! keep up the good work! keep writing my friend =)

"i know his name but know not his face" have you met him in the internet? hehe just curious!

Naw this was excellent. i don't know why you would think other way. well this was so nice and i like how you end this, that you cant see his face. yet all thru the dream you can see both of you touch and kiss and talk.

excellent. 5/5 David