Comments : Why cant he see?

  • 17 years ago

    by XxMoonLightxX

    This was a beautiful poem...i loved it...
    great job
    5/5

    chek out my new poem if you can

    love,
    ~shannon~

  • 17 years ago

    by LickleGirlScared

    Aww thats so sweet...but an awful experience...i wish i could of helped ya like your helping me xx lym xx hugs xxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Linds

    You seem to put a questions at the end of almost every poem you do. I'm not saying anything is wrong with that it's just i never really see that in a lot of poems...but in all good peom...kinda reminds me of some one that wont leave me alone and I can relate to that..I know how it feels.

    --Sophia