"I stand still, eyes closed, heart thumping. I open my eyes to find the velvety Dark waiting with open arms, and am eager to be wrapped in its velvet blanket of Oblivion"

Lovely lines!!..Excellent work!...kp it up!!.......u've created a powerful and yet beautiful imagery thru' this Heartfelt peice!..Kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

I love it!! it's really great... keep up the good work. :D
you should read my poem (my heart is crashing) or maybe some others.