Precious

by Rach   May 3, 2007


The hours we spend
are not nearly enough,
to express the emotions
is really tough.

to tell you the truth
i dont know were to start,
these feelings that i have
all affect the heart.

your eyes are so precious
amazing and blue,
you have no idea what I'm
thinking while looking at you.

with one touch of your hand
and one glimpse of your smile,
you make me feel like the most precious girl
even if its only for a while.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    WOW that was awesome, great flow , the stanza was great and the wording was excellent
    great job on expressing your love ,wonderful job well done, your friend Tracy 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by NightKeeper

    Thanks for commenting on one of my poems. It was ment to make people think differently: ) But I like this poem. The flow of the words is realy well done! Great poem! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Princess

    Its realli cute i reallii luv it =]] 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Chris

    Great poem, very sweet. I like the flow and I can really relate to how you feel. Thanks for commenting.

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