I like it nice emotion
you express you feelings clearly
good job...
i could feel your heartbreak
one love...starcrossedlvr

Wow amazing poem!, it was very well written and had a lot of emotion in it!, i totally just loved the poem, the flow, the meaning, it just seemed to be perfect, great job!

This is sweet<3
keep it up haha

rebecca

I like your poems.. they're awsome! n quotes too...

love~!

Hayy!! dang that poem was so sweet.. seriously i think u have a talent for writting and u should keep doing it.. cos ur really gud haha anyways much luv candyxxx