Comments : When I Was Fourteen

  • 17 years ago

    by Lost in Life

    This speeks to me and its killing me inside because im in love right now so i hope i am 14 with a burning desire for someone and so many times before ive felt special inside with someone but when you find someone that you like then you wont know if it was true until its lost but and i know its never been true for me before but theres always hope and this time i can't sleep and im sitting up at night crying just thinking about that special someone but im crying with a smile on my face because i think this time it is true

    what i mean is its a heavy load to be with someone and would worry anyone if that person meaned anything to them and i dont know your story and i dont need (well its up to you if i do anyway) anyway you will find the right person ok and so many scars will pass thru a lifetime but if your strong you can break free from them

  • 17 years ago

    by Delie

    This is soo great.
    i love every single word of it and it means so much. you put all your words soo nicely together it's just...PERFECT :]
    i love that at the end it's always that same hand and with how you used to love the scar.
    i think even if people go through similar problems like this, but don't turn to cutting they still used to love that "scar". not anything physical, but the scar imprinted on their hearts.
    we grow from that and...this is why i lurve this poem :)