This is a good poem. There are a couple mstakes in it like: you need to take out all of the ' as it has gone funny. 'Should tell you' should be 'should I tell you'. in te fourth line of the poem it should be 'layed'. Apart from them it was a good poem. 5/5

Kalee

This is really beautiful! i love it. great job. 5/5

xo kisses xo

OMG this was so WONDERFUL!!! it was reall good and beautiful and i loved it keep up the good work great job 5/5 ;)

Wonderful job! I love it. Very sweet and full of love. 5/5
"And my heart almost stopped as I said those words
But the relief
Of this when you say them back"
^^ My fav lines. Kep up the great job.
Take care

Awww... i love this one. very very sweet. i gotta love the ending. we are alway scared if the person we love the most doesnt love us back the same. aww.. just sweet. keep up the love pieces. you are a natural in them.

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy
5/5