Should've Said No

by *Charisma*   May 3, 2007


Went to a party where she shouldn't have been
Thought it'd be fun to hang with her friends.
Parents worried too much, so she'd just go.
She wouldn't be long, they'd never know.

She had a few drinks after they made fun.
She couldn't stand to be the only sober one.
And after a couple of wisecracks and jokes
She too, took part in whatever they smoked.

Stumbling down the hall, with a hot guy
Didn't seem wrong after all that night.
The party was great, and she went home,
Thinking to herself, they'll never know.

A few weeks passed, and it never came.
The time of the month that was always the same.
She ran to the drugstore nearest the school
Three tests later, the party wasn't so cool.

She drove herself home, held her head low.
Voices in her head saying, "You should've said no."
A future down the drain, parents yet to face.
All because she felt a little out of place.

A new life within her own made this a mess.
Nobody would've known, if she'd never said yes.
Now the party that lasted for a single night
Has completely changed the rest of her life.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Poetess Lana

    Wow... that was a fantastic poem. you have good flow and rhyme.

    5/5
    Allanah

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    It was really flawless because the wording and flow was great and the topic was unique and so real at the same time
    Keep up the good work
    Take care,
    Laura

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Holy friggin' crap!!! I'm compeltely speechless. That was sooo amazing Charisma! I mean, WOW! So powerful, and (*sigh*)...that just happened to someone I know...I can't even imagine the hot chills that must flush their faces when they find out. That was such a great interpretation of the feelings they must experience. Amazing job girl! 100/5!!!
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Good good, im glad you understand what your writing here :D i think your style to this was very serious and sent out a real strong messege to young girls especially, this should be on some like help website or sumfin bcoz its really good :D

    xxx alex xxx