by *Charisma* May 3, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Went to a party where she shouldn't have been |
by Poetess Lana
Wow... that was a fantastic poem. you have good flow and rhyme. |
by Tricky Daze
It was really flawless because the wording and flow was great and the topic was unique and so real at the same time |
by Midnight Sun
Holy friggin' crap!!! I'm compeltely speechless. That was sooo amazing Charisma! I mean, WOW! So powerful, and (*sigh*)...that just happened to someone I know...I can't even imagine the hot chills that must flush their faces when they find out. That was such a great interpretation of the feelings they must experience. Amazing job girl! 100/5!!! |
Good good, im glad you understand what your writing here :D i think your style to this was very serious and sent out a real strong messege to young girls especially, this should be on some like help website or sumfin bcoz its really good :D |