Good good, im glad you understand what your writing here :D i think your style to this was very serious and sent out a real strong messege to young girls especially, this should be on some like help website or sumfin bcoz its really good :D

xxx alex xxx

Holy friggin' crap!!! I'm compeltely speechless. That was sooo amazing Charisma! I mean, WOW! So powerful, and (*sigh*)...that just happened to someone I know...I can't even imagine the hot chills that must flush their faces when they find out. That was such a great interpretation of the feelings they must experience. Amazing job girl! 100/5!!!
~Midnight Sun

It was really flawless because the wording and flow was great and the topic was unique and so real at the same time
Keep up the good work
Take care,
Laura

Wow... that was a fantastic poem. you have good flow and rhyme.

5/5
Allanah