You Don't Have To Call

((#2oo!))

Standing under the street lamp, with ashen light cast around,
Looking at your feet and kicking at the ground.
The tears are drying up, but the pain, it still hurts;
Thinking of it now, knowing that it wouldn't work.

He's staring at you; how you can feel his eyes set in-
You're trying not to show the pain you're hiding within.
How broken you heart is; the true feelings inside;
The real amount of tears that you have silently cried.

He's trying so hard to talk, but you're pushing him away;
You just can take all of this for one more day.
Being a liar and so two-faced, with both of them so pretty-
As you stand there crying, under the lights of the city.

No amount of anything could make this all okay-
You're slowly breaking his heart with each word you say.
"Please, I'm sorry, but you're just not my all."
As you turn to walk away, you whisper: "You Don't Have To Call."

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You Don't Have To Call ; By: Ciao - I liked this, I think you just tore at a thousand and one teenage girls hearts with this piece. I loved some of the imagery that you used, you spaced it out well it wasn't a bunch of metaphors crammed into a few lines lol, good job Dear. :]
SPELLING - 2/3
GRAMMAR - 4.5/5
CONTENT - 4/5
FLOW - 4/5
FOLLOWED RULES - 2/2
TOTAL - 16.5/20