Omg i love it!!!!!!!!
i really really do!!!

"I have a story, my dear, and it is headed your way" this line should be in quotes and have a period at the end of the line.

I really liked the poem but the fact that the stanzas vary from four lines and three lines it keeps it fresh however I dont really like how it stays the same for two verses kind of throws it off. Wow such a sweet ending.. I loved it.. its true love sees nothing like that it only feels. Wonderful ending, at first I thought it was going to be sad and you had it in the wrong category but now I see that it couldn't have fit better. I loved the ending and the title was a perfect fit. Nice work.

Wow...that poem is totally awesome. It just goes to show you that even if someone appears to be perfect, they themselves have troubles and can't bear the weight of the world on their own. Beautifully written. 5/5 for sure

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.