by Vanessa May 3, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Moonlight shinned in my window bare |
You were not there to dry my crimson tears |
I loved the repeating verse in this poem.. it seemed to fit every single time that it was added, and it never onces seemed forced. nice. |
by Lisa
Very well written, Your emotions showed very strong with this poem. |
by beezy
Such a sad poem. I know what it's like to lose a loved one. It hurts a lot. There was a lot of emotion in this, and it was portrayed beautifully. Well done. |
by Austin
The repeating was great, i think this was a wonderfully written poem |