The start of this poem was excellent. it was exciting and full of emotion. i am honoured to be the first to comment on this poem. cause this is a very special piece. it is well written by a very talented poet.

5/5 David

Must agree with david...

Wow. amazing. 5/5. i dont know wat else to say. just amazing

I relate to this poem so much... it's like you took the words out of my mouth... or well you would have a while ago. great job though! a very enjoyable read! 5/5 atw