Lover or friend (I need you there)

Won't ever care = I won't ever care

I enjoyed this poem, and it was very cute... However, I did not particularly find your lack and often misuse of punctuation that appeasing. In some places, I found that I had no direction for the flow, and other places I found you would have an inaccurate punctuation mark placed that i just wanted to strangle (although, it's pretty difficult to strangle a comma... lol)

I liked your word use, and despite the evil comma and other punctuation that was misused, the flow was smooth too. I liked your rhyming pattern, and it very much so reminds me of a poem that I would write.

Well done,
5/5
~Stephen White

Astonish
,
allways
improving
...

This is easy to relate to.
I love the way it's written.
5/5 wonderful