by RavishingEruption May 3, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
rekindled love
A helpless heart broken into two |
Good stuff i enjoyed it |
This is such a good poem. i enjoy reading ur work. there all straight to the point and i see nothin wrong with them.. ur very talented.. n i can relate to this poem alot. 5/5 |
I live this poem shows alot of emotion toward that person and how you feel good job 5/5 |
by BlueDreams
Another beautiful emotions poem you portrait here, "sometimes life's like a cloud, we never know what would be happen..." well done! |
by Zeus
I absolutely love this poem. It was very well written. I liked how you compared love to a war. 5/5 excellent job. |