Excellent poem great job I loved the whole reflex thing cause it totally flowed and madee sence i aint never seen some one do something like that before

A good piece of work, you surley do point out what is most beautiful in life and you do it in a very poetic way... The flow and the structure were also good so it is overall a great poem

good work =)

Brilliantly done ,well done.

Hey,
nice poem, the flow a the structure were very good, you did a good job on pointing out whats most beautiful in life =) 5/5
kisses stephanie

Before I start: Thanks for the comment. You think you can vote? I'm voting on yours. :)

I liked how you did this. You gave everything a little twist. And it made sense. Mine would have ended up like this:

Ice Cream = Cream of Ice

:)

You had a wonderful vocabulary it added to the poem a lot.

Great Style

5/5

That was beautiful! I loved these lines, totally me:
Astonishing and unplanned
Soothing tunes and rhythm
I hate planning and i love music lol.
Great job, write more so i can comment more [[=
Carissa

Well written wallace, I can tell you spent alot of time in its creation. The poem has a nice flow with good imagery. Great poem!

Very interesting, I have never heard of a palindrome before, but now I know what one is, and I think it was great.

Great job - 5/5

~Lizzie~

This is really beautiful! I enjoyed it alot. Keep writing.

-Yvonne

Excellent job on your Palindrome. Word choices were great :)

Take Care Cindy

This is really creative! Where did you get such a great idea? Love it!!

I have tried to make a palindrome poem before, but I failed miserably. Knowing that, I can honestly say that you did a spectacular job on this poem! I've always admired unique poems, and your choice of words contributed to the elegance of your poem. My favorite line was: Charming yet perilous. It captured so much within such few words.
Well, great job, and I wouldn't change anything!
Keep it up, 5/5!

Hatori
The Illusionist

I love this style of poerty and i think you portrayed this style really well. nicely done here. Well done ~mel

You did one!! Yay
And you did it amazingly
I loved the way it all flowed together, it seemed so natural!
5/5
*Gem*

Dear nice poem i had tried writing one like this (palondrom) but .....:(... gud work keep it up.

I really love this poem..........great work and can you check out some of my poems and tell me what you think.thankz....and 5/5......

GREAT POEM!!!!!!!!!!!

Nicely done palindrome...perfect to form....good job!

Wonderful poem! I love all the lines! 5/5!
Thanks for commenting on my poem :)

Wow, I loved this poem. It made me smile so much. 5/5 It's written amazingly. Keep it up! I would love to read more
Check mine out please

I really like it:D