The basis of this poem is great, but I would not use any form of contractions (I'm, It's, Don't)..use the full words for maximum impact. Also, if you cut out the profanity, the poem will have much deeper effect. With curse words, you're just exuding superficial anger, but if you do not use those kind of words, you are implying a much deeper sense of anger, which I feel would be better. Nonetheless, great poem, 5/5 from me. :)

Beautiful work dear!!..very well written n the flow was perfect and the structure was good too...all over nice work!
xxPoojaxx

Well written heartfelt, and excellent poem strong emtion, and great flow. 5/5 once more