One word EXCELLENT! hehe keep up the poems cant wait to read more xx

Too deep...real good...be sure to chk the rest of mine.

Deep very deep left me with a smile keep it up id like to see more of your work!!! :)

Great poem, very nice, you should write some more!!! lol, 5/5

This is a really good poem and you must really love this person.my favorite line is: i looked deeply into your eyes and began to dissolve with tears because you mean more to me than words can express..
excellent poem you should put some more on here

Wow.
That was amazingly good.
Keep it up. :]
5/5

A very beautiful poem, with lots of feelings.
I LOVE IT!!!

Wow oh wow wow i dont mean that to be a bad thing it just took my breath away. im amazed that just a mere human like myself could have wrote something like that. oh wow you..........are.............amazing............you..........have........a.......future....in.....writing

sincerly
Sam ^-^
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That poem is hot!!!!!!!:)

Wow! beautiful! great choice of words!

Verry cleverr </333

This is such a beautiful expression of love.
I hope you get lost so deep in it that you haver have to come out , but then maybe you have already

Outstanding. You wrote this with immense feeling in you, and your happiness is felt in every word wrote, like you never thought you were worthy to have someone love you that much. Brilliant

Again, what an amazing word choice! I do think that sometimes your lines can be a little long. Perhaps you could try using less words while still maintaining the emotion and the importance of each line. Lovely write, though. :)

Aww this is a realy cute poem! I think EVERY girl only wishes to get that feeling! Awesome job Darlena!

I REALLY LOVE THIS POEM ITS SO SWEET

Wow very touching. captivated my heart as i read it...those three words are a hard one to say for anyone, i mean people say it carelessly and don't mean any heart into it...
but i can tell he meant it. i mean the way he said it made your chest race. a sign that his love has transfer from his heart to yours. again a very sweet and loving poem. keep it up
5/5

You are my passion, my heart, and my world
Your love is pure and unconditional
You love me for who I am
And that is so rare

^^^this part really got to me. This is so true and if you really do have this you are so very lucky. You have a lot of talent. Keep it up. check out my work if u like. 5/5
~Forever Broken~

Another wow.....you are an amazing poet and i love your poems....keep it up...

This was an amazing poem, i loved it, and i love how true and deep it was. great job