Usually, i prefer poems that rhyme (as you can tell, from most of my poems, lol) but...this one i really liked. sorta like when my heart feels like it contiues to break, over and over again, for no reason whatsoever. If the poem applies to you, eat chocalate. it helps depression. :)

I LOVE THIS POEM ...........5/5............u put alot of emotiom in this poem .......check out someof my poems and tell me what you think .thankz and great poem again ......keep up da good work

I really really liked it :D don't give up ;)