Wow that is an amazing poem. It truely is! I loved it. Keep up the magnificent work. Xx Chrissie

Another really good poem hun, i think it was really well expressed :D

xxx alex xxx

A good piece, with a lot of passion within it. There's more I wanted to say but I've got to get going, sorry.

Brad

P.S. Thanks for your suggestions on my poem 'Something I wish to say'. I did take notice of them and I've made the corrections

I adore this...this was frikken excellent!
My favourite part would have to be the first and last stanza.
The first is such a powerful opener, really pulling the reader into the poem and the last is so intense and such a perfect way to wrap up.
Word choice and rhyme scheme are enjoyable and I thought the flow was flawless throughout.