Mistake

by skynerraw   May 4, 2007


I made a mistake
Writing that poem, fake
And retaliating on you
Even though some of what I said was true
I made a mistake on doing these things
I know all the trouble it brings
I'm truly full of sorrow
I hope you'll forgive me tomorrow
My words have been harshly unfair
I'm falling into despair
For you to hear me say
I took it the wrong way
And blew up in your face
And what you lost I can't replace
But girl, my best friend
I promise till the end
This'll never happen again, I hope
Because this has already made me mope
And lay down and cry
As I hope to die
But I'll love you forever
And never say whatever

*-Sky-*
I'm sorry.......

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  • 17 years ago

    by CHOKE

    I hope that your appology was accepted.
    my favorite line was,
    "I'm falling into despair"
    it just has a certain catch to it.
    5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    I really really liked this one! I think it's really sweet to apologize in poetry. 5/5

    Ravyn

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Wow
    nice work
    it was kind of sad
    I hope your better or everything is
    great job

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Wow!!...excellent work...touching!deep!...sad but beautifully written!...kp up de good work..a 5/5!..
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by isabel

    A really sad one...but also wondeful in every single way...
    5/5

    *isabel*