Comments : Mistake

  • 17 years ago

    by isabel

    A really sad one...but also wondeful in every single way...
    5/5

    *isabel*

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Wow!!...excellent work...touching!deep!...sad but beautifully written!...kp up de good work..a 5/5!..
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Wow
    nice work
    it was kind of sad
    I hope your better or everything is
    great job

  • 17 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    I really really liked this one! I think it's really sweet to apologize in poetry. 5/5

    Ravyn

  • 17 years ago

    by CHOKE

    I hope that your appology was accepted.
    my favorite line was,
    "I'm falling into despair"
    it just has a certain catch to it.
    5/5.