I was really enjoyed reading this poem till last lines: "For, he's searching for what
Only they really have. A
Right to his own feelings ". I think this doesn't fit in the rest of the poem.

I suggest punctuation. I know you know it, and it will really help the flow/meaning.
Also, the flow is a little off...that may be because of above comment.

Otherwise.
I really liked this. It was an interesting read and about something I've never read before. Nicely done. Congrats.

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So, I can't write Acrostics to save my life and this was like [Slap to the face.] "You obviously suck at writing Acrostics, Sheena, because it seems so easy!"

Lmao. This is really good. I'm not sure, but I disliked something about it. But I don't know what. However, I liked a few lines here and there [they stuck out to me] and such. So, nicely done. =]

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