Wow that was trully sad, Loved the situation, loved the poem 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

And, oh so loud he once cried.
[I don't know why but this stuck out to me. Eh. =)]

is the man who got them trough.
[I think you mean "through.}" =)]

Visits upon visits, no one's ever home.
[Again, it stuck out to me. Nice. That's hard to do.]

it just so happens, he doesn't wait long.
[Awkward sentence, but you need it. I'd say "...happens, but" or "...happens; he" ... grammar there.

Anyways, I like the poem, and I loved the odd random scheme of the last stanza. But, I didn't really get it. Sorry. I've never seen the movie. I won't vote, since I haven't seen it, to make it fair.

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