by BECCA lessTHANthree May 4, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
The night was young, as were we, |
by nikki
Wow. it was an awesome poem, and yes it was really long, i see what you mean now, well i cannot find any thing wrong with it, it was perfect. 5/5 |
by CEE CEE
WOW ........ WOW I FREAKIN LOVED IT SOOOO MUCH I DONT CARE IF IT WAS TRUE BECAUSE FROM THE BEGINNING IT WAS A GREAT POEM AND WEN THE PART CAME OF HIM DYIN FOR YOU MY EYES GOT WATERY OMG I LOVED IT GREAT POEM GREAT POEM |
by Melpomene
Oh and btw i know i commented on this poem before but i found i didn't write enough about it so once i read it again i decide to leave another comment. Hope you dont mind =) |
by Melpomene
I really enjoyed reading this poem, i found it to be more like a story but you pulled it off quite nicely. The emotions portrayed were beautifully sad. So strong and powerful. I found this to be heartfelt and capturing. The story you portrayed was amazing. I found it to be sweet and loving at the start then it had a twist going dark and sad. Interesting poem i enjoyed reading it alot. Well done~mel |
Beautiful poem |