by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex May 4, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Due to syllable count, here's a better understanding of the first line: "Deep on the out" means you're beautiful on the outside "and shallow in" means but you're shallow on the inside. |
Wow, that was brilliant. The wording was excellent. |
by skynerraw
I have never seen this type of poem before....hmmm I liked it though, I didn't get the part about "shoving handfuls down your throat" maybe I'm just stupid though, it was a good poem though!! |
Never heard of one of these before but reading yours kept me gripped. x x |
Good poem, I was pulled right in and just had to read it several times... |
XD I love Terzanelle's and I definately loved this poem. The wording you chose was great, especially the first line, it pulled me into it right away; I was kept in the whole time, too. |