XD I love Terzanelle's and I definately loved this poem. The wording you chose was great, especially the first line, it pulled me into it right away; I was kept in the whole time, too.

5.5

Good poem, I was pulled right in and just had to read it several times...

Never heard of one of these before but reading yours kept me gripped. x x

I have never seen this type of poem before....hmmm I liked it though, I didn't get the part about "shoving handfuls down your throat" maybe I'm just stupid though, it was a good poem though!!

Wow, that was brilliant. The wording was excellent.

"Don't smile; you're not that bold,
Then shove handfuls down your throat,
With a shameful heart of "gold.""

^ This stanza was my favourite, especially the last line. I find Terzanelles hard to write, and I'm amazed at how well this is done.

5/5.