Broken (Acrostic)

For your first try...Bravo..it's turned out well....good acrostic...this 1's got it's own charm.Kp writing!
xxPoojaxx

Hey,
Well considering this is your first try it was good. But it was really short. I know its an acrstic but you only put one word on every line. I thought to improve the poem you should of used more words - describe things more. I liked the words you used htough, none of them were cliche. There isnt much i can say about this poem as its so short. But keep trying to write acrostics and im sure you'll get there! xx

For a first try, it's good...

Josie

Short but sweet, 4/5

Yay ive been wanting to read one of these for a while just i didnt want to put the effort into it. im not sure i would have used "karma" it seemed a bit duller than the other words u selected but hey its works theres no rules for these.