by Amanda May 4, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
...Can't get out |
That was intense, i like this one nice job keep up the good work! |
by sian
I liked this one, the varying sentence structure made it easier and more interesting to read. sian x |
I like the words you used and the form of the poem, they create images in the mind, illustrating the poem and giving it a deeper minings. Good job! |