Im not a huge fan of ABab structure but it flowed pretty good and I found nothing wrong with it, I liked your choice of words too :) keep it up |
Hey...Great write!....Well penned!...The flow ws just great!...kp it up! |
by Gem
"I barely remember the love of sol |
I think that sol should have a capital because its the name of a god. |
Look deep into these brown eyes |
by Fsams
Excellent piece with an awsome flow and nicely rhyming stanzas. Superb poetry 5/5 |
by Fsams
Excellent piece with an awsome flow and nicely rhyming stanzas. Superb poetry 5/5 |
by Dee
Great choice of words, it has a wounderful flow.... keep up the good work |
Good poem overall, I also wondered what was that sol and in the end I knew :) Thats good you mentioned. Kepp up the good work :) |