AWWWH!
This was so cute =)
beautiful imagery, beautiful word choice and flawless flow.
I love it!

That is a magnificent poem. And a very very cute story. Alot of detail...i just loved it! Well done! Xx Chrissie

I wish the best for you both x

OMG fantastic flawless ... this was one of the best poems ive ever read no1 cud of rote it better tht was im lost 4 words just amazing x

Gem
This is a lovely poem. It's so nice the way you put your engagment to verse.

The lights are dimmed down for the atmosphere
The romantic mood is heightened this year
A candlelight dinner, a table for two
A rose in a glass is glistening with dew

I really love the imagery of this stanza.
Take care love Cindy

SOOOOOOOO PERFECTT!!
Where do you find men like that??
I envy you lol
Again i love it!!
Carissa [=

I wanted to cry when you said yes honey :)
Love this one
I love you
Marcus xx

What a charming piece you have here, ma'dear! A lovely work which could easily move the readers of your craft by such 'unprocessed' emotions. Congratulations for the both of you lovebirds. ;) Love, Debbie

Awww that so cute i like this. yay go gem!! getting married !!! i really like the ending when he pulled out the box and the heart thingy...yea thats cute. 5/5

Wow, that is truly romantic. Sounds like you've met your perfect match and someone who can spoil you. A beautiful story.
Keep it up, I love hearing your stories and your incredible love affair.

Awwwww gem, its so touching , lucky girl that must be the most special moment for you.thanks for sharing with us , love ya :)
Great poem.

God i shed a tear too when i read this :'))
it was just perfect as oneday i hope i'l get that far but for the moment its a dream thats out of reach :(( this poem is perfect in its devotiona and love, just amazingly perfect in every way, shape and form :)) 99/5

Another good poem . the rythem was good up to the last line.

All it took was a box to change their whole life

it didnt seem to flow with the rest of the poem. but i cant put my finger on what doesnt fit.

Omg, so beatiful. Romantically sweet, i love it, every single bit of it! And congratulations :D

That was so beautiful. I love it.

I absolutely love this poem.
Well done on winning first place.
The love was shown and the flow was flawless.
Keep it up 5/5

[Sarah]

Another wonderful poem, so much detail i love you poetry you are a fenominal writter you should really publish it

This completely touched my heart, i'm amazed how wonderfully you turned your proposal into such a fantastic poem. the flow is perfect, word choice magnificent, and everything about just works! great job, and congratulations! 5/5