The living room was cosy, the curtains drawn

^^ I think cosy is spelled cozy. That's just how I spell it.

But anyways I could tell what you were somewhat trying to say. But not fully. But such a great poem! 5/5

Amazing poem.
The imagery was clear and the rhyming didn't seem forced.
You done a great job with the title.
Keep it up 5/5

[Sarah]

Gem

I love it. I wrote a poem about the same thing (brainwashed little wife) but you took it from a different angle and has worked wonderfully. You have such a talent to just see a title and come up with a work of art.
5/5.

Kelly
xx