When I read this poem shock ran threw me. The more I think on the poems you write the more I think on how messed up thios world is. Written very good. I love it 5/5

Oh my god. I have tears falling.
That was terrifying & scary to read. It felt real & just reading this made me upset. Knowing that this kind of stuff is real and goes on in real life - completely scares the living sh-t out of me.

"One night things went to far
As her parents had their twisted fun
They were completely unaware
This little girl's life was almost done.

Hitting her with force
Listening to her screams
Sick smiles on their faces
This was their twisted dream."

^ Wow. This poem sent shivers down my spine. Fantastic job! Keep writing! 5.5

Stephanie Lynn .+.