Im sorry guys i know it aint good just was bored and felt the need to write please leave comments.

This is very good mel, maybe change the grammer errors like capitalize the title"Cold to Stone Then Ice" and the i's, but toher than that it is perfect, i give it a 5/5!!! Keep writing!!!

Great poem it has that dark touch to that and i love the darkness lol great poem has a wonderful flow and lots of spirit and is powerful great job and thanks for the comment

keenan

Beautiful poem, and well written.